I Why Others Choose To Die See The topic alone has to be something that crosses everyone??™s mind one time or another most recently my own thoughts for no particular reason.
When I was reading, his final words knowing that he was no longer alive made it harder to not become involved. The reflections he makes while sharing his final thoughts regarding his own death sentence are impactful. The writers??™ unwillingness to die hits even harder when the reader has experienced the death of a loved one in his family first hand. The essay did not convince me to stand for or against doctor-assisted suicide so I remain unconvinced.
I do not know what to think because the decision should not be one that has to be made, doctor-assisted suicide brings up every issue regarding life over death, and health professionals disregarding ethics to deal with the skyrocketing costs of end of life care. If the choice were mine to make I would choose to live for as long as possible rather than having the doctor assist me with suicide. More over the writer??™s essay was more like a daily memoir there were almost no facts other than his own experience supporting what he strongly believed in life. He gives an understanding from the essay that he is fully aware of his condition and that he has resigned to his fate by reflecting on his life and that further adding to the reader??™s sense of appreciation. The feedback that WritePoint sends back has more value with each use, but it could take some becoming accustomed. I am never been more aware of the mistakes that I make until the system finally points them out and I acknowledge them by fixing the problem or issue. Varieties of errors tend to be easily overlooked because the student does not know how to identify simple mechanical errors. Assuming that the average online student has been out of school for more than a decade, with WritePoint that student can refresh his or her writing skills.
Thus a student effectively remembers more of the skills that originally were thought to of been forgotten because of never using the skills over a large number of years. The feedback gives idea on how to improve the paper making it a more academic paper once the mistakes are completely revised and edited. The feel and presentation of the persuasive essay should enhance the expierence for the reader. The essay is easily has more of a profound effect on the reader because it is not overwhelming with countless mistakes and grammatical errors. Occasionally it may seem like too much trouble submitting an assignment to WritePoint until all the mistakes are corrected, but every writer should always remember to follow his instincts fully using better judgment when forced to make that call. I do not believe that my final assignment will be biased because I can clearly demonstrate the main objective while supporting the alternative as well.
I look forward to making an outline to approach to show how I will relate information from both sides of the story. The introduction always confers with the main objective, followed by two additional paragraphs to supporting my claims, backing them up with evidence that has been proven true beyond all reasonable doubts. I do not think that I will have too many problems convincing the reader that planning for retirement is the much wiser alternative than depending on Social Security payments alone.
For the past three weeks I have made it a point to submit my work to WritePoint not only am I learning the rules I should follow but I am learning how to avoid the number of mistakes I make. I am going to pay extra close attention to the way my sentences are structured further demonstrate how the evidence supports the bigger picture. Generally, I do not have as many problems concerning punctuation I want to stop limiting myself by using only minimal punctuation at best. The main problem that I have had for some weeks involves the correct use of commas in the sentence; I am not always sure where they should go.